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Friday, September 14, 2018

Week Two Outdoors: Journalling


Remember your job is to write a journal about something that happened to you today for H.W.


Journal Check List
Do You Have:
Name date Right corner                                                                      Yes      No
Title over the top                                                                                  Yes      No
Indent to start                                                                                      Yes      No
A reflection in each journal                                                                  Yes      No
Three Journals a Week (one outdoors two of your choice)                 Yes      No


How is it written?
Element
A= What you are going to be talking about
 Needs Improvement       Satisfactory        Good       Excellent



 Comment:


P=Why you think this
  Needs Improvement       Satisfactory        Good       Excellent





 Comment:







E= Proof life or book to back up what you think
  Needs Improvement       Satisfactory        Good       Excellent





 Comment:







C=Ending thought
  Needs Improvement       Satisfactory        Good       Excellent





 Comment:







Grammar and Spelling
  Needs Improvement       Satisfactory        Good       Excellent





 Comment:







Overall:





Journal Example
            When writing a journal, you want to start by reflecting or talking about what the journal is going to be about. (In this journal I am going to talk about how cool foxes are) The you give some proof or another thought to back up your reflection. (Foxes are cool because they have a lot of skills that other animals do not have) You then give an example from a book or your own life to back up what you are saying with your proof. (One time when I was out walking a fox followed me the whole way! It was so quite I didn’t ever realise it was there until I turned around) You then end it by finishing your thought or summarizing what you said. (This is why foxes are so cool! They are super silent more so then other animals and I want to keep learning more about them)

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